July 20, 2012

Your Feedback Needed

For those of you not on LinkedIn, I'm posting this request for input here as well.

Explaining the Storefront Safety Council's mission as concisely and briefly as possible will help us as we connect with more people.

Here are five variations. Do you like any? Dislike any? Have changes or alternatives to suggest?

  • The Storefront Safety Council wants to stop vehicle-into-building crashes.
  • The Storefront Safety Council works to prevent crashes into buildings.
  • The Storefront Safety Council works to prevent vehicle-into-building crashes.
  • The Storefront Safety Council promotes vehicle-into-building crash prevention and protection strategies.
  • The Storefront Safety Council engages key stakeholders to prevent vehicle-into-building crashes.

All comments welcome. You can send feedback via the comments form here with this post, or email me: mark [at] storefrontcrashes.com.

I know not everyone is into this wonky stuff, but your thoughts will be valuable. Thanks!

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